MChav's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SRKilldren]

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Yeah sounds creepy, but it does sound good, sounds like it took alot of effort to make.

SREvol responds:

Yes, it did! Thanks for noticing lol! It kind of has an eerie but still victorious feel going on? That's what I was going for, perhaps like in the movies a little Jurassic Parky, they get away from the T-Rex but don't know there are flying dinosaurs hahaha. Thanks for the review

[Journey of a Kite]

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Wow, sounds amazing. I could imagine a flash with this as the soundtrack. Sounds like it took alot of work.

jnry3 responds:

Roughly 40 hours was put into this song. Thanks for the compliments! ^_^

[->>Static Shock<<-]

Very original and creative

Sounded very professional, I liked what you did with the ending. The only criticism I can really make is that I though the middle part of the song wasn't epic enough, It did still sound good though.

vwvSTATICvwv responds:

Well, I did my best. I need some advice on how to improve...

Thanks 8)

[Tetris Dance Revolution =WB=]

It was alright..

Maybe you could do something other than the main tune, as in intros/buildups, breaks and fills?

also the chords behind the main melody sounded out of tune to the melody.

WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, that would've been cool, I wanted to drop it out at one point and just have the bass, but it couldn't really hold its own like that, so I just kept it plain and simple. Didn't want to mix it up too much, since repetition is a key part of dance, but yeah, a bit more direction wouldn't have hurt.
Thanks for your comments.

[DJ Comet-Culture Shock]

Good song

Need stronger drums to go with that bassline though.

TheComet responds:

I'm not sure what you're listening to this song over, the kickers in this are pretty damn hard and are on the verge of peaking they're so much louder than the bassline <.<

[Rock Out Mix- Shanghai Paragon]

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A very good song, it kind of reminds me of the matrix..

itsameyayo responds:

Thanks!

-Yeah, matrix fricken' rocks, I love that movie and it's music :D

-Thanks for the kind review! Hope to hear more of your stuff.

-ImperfectDisciple

[Ravers Fantasy - DJ Rif m]

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Yeah it was alright, I thought the start was a bit suddent though, needs an intro. maybe you could've added some more variation by changing the cutoff through parts?

DJ-RF responds:

Yeah, this song is incomplete, and I don't plan on finishing it now.

[TheReno-[Sewer Dreams]]

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It didn't sound uplifting until the higher pitched main parts, it sounded more like a horror movie, which may fit in with your comments, so ignore this part if it was intentional.

Anyways, I think there was too much reverb on the bells or percs or whatever you used, maybe you could lessen the reverb or use a piano?

TheReno responds:

Yeah It wasnt supposed to be happy towards the end. But yeah I guess I got fix the bells. Thanks for the help.

[HappyHerdcore5 (Revisited)]

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It doesn't loop right,

Maybe you could add some hats and keep a regular pumping kick beat, which is usually regular in happy hardcore and a tempo of around 170 - 180.

Idiosyncratic responds:

The looping part takes a little timing, I should redo that.

Actually Happy Herdcore is a running inside joke, so the loops and beats aren't really happy hardcore or anything like that. But thanks for the advice, and maybe for the next Happy Herdcore loop, I'll actually spend some time on the loop.

[[ID]-Ready]

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Hi, I didn't like the beat, it wasn't regular enough, like it sounded out of the rythm.. kind of, and the song doesn't sound like you could rave to it... maybe you could use a more middle freq bass for the melody.

Although I did like the intro and the FX you put into it.

itsameyayo responds:

Well, you wouldn't rave to it, it's not really techno, but I get what you mean. It's more or less a movie soundtrack thing, not the mainstream, but whatever.

-Thanks for the review! Much appreciated.

-ImperfectDisciple